Can I use a personal example?
Sometimes, and check your rubric. Where allowed, treat it as evidence to be analyzed rather than as illustration. Personal examples that are described and not analyzed are the usual weakness.
This comes up on Social Psychology Support, where it is answered in the context of the work itself.
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