Will editing make it sound like someone else?
It should not. Every change comes back tracked with a reason, and you reject anything that does not sound like you. Where a passage needs different content rather than different words, we say so as a comment rather than writing it.
This comes up on Nursing School Personal Statement, where it is answered in the context of the work itself.
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