Can I change my thesis while writing?
Yes and you often should. Writing is how the argument gets tested, and finding that your original claim does not survive your own evidence is a sign of thinking rather than failure. Update the thesis and the introduction to match what you actually argued.
This comes up on Writing a Thesis Statement, where it is answered in the context of the work itself.
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