Should the thesis say what the essay will do?
Generally not in the form this essay will examine, which announces structure rather than stating a position. Some disciplines accept a brief roadmap after the thesis. The thesis itself should be the claim, not a description of the document.
This comes up on Writing a Thesis Statement, where it is answered in the context of the work itself.
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