Am I using too many semicolons?
Possibly. A semicolon joins ideas that belong together, and using several in a paragraph usually means sentences are being chained that would read better separately. If you can replace one with a period and lose nothing, the period is often the better choice.
This comes up on Colons and Semicolons, where it is answered in the context of the work itself.
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