How do I fix a paragraph that feels like it rambles?
Write in the margin what the paragraph claims, in one short sentence. If you need two sentences, it is two paragraphs. If you cannot write one at all, the paragraph has no claim and needs one before anything else is worth fixing.
This comes up on Paragraph Structure, where it is answered in the context of the work itself.
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