How do I improve beyond fixing individual errors?
Read academic writing in your own field with attention to phrasing rather than content, and keep a personal list of the corrections you receive most often. Most writers have five or six recurring patterns, and knowing which are yours is more useful than general study.
This comes up on Academic English for International Students, where it is answered in the context of the work itself.
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