Am I using too many commas?
If sentences are being broken into many short pieces, the issue is often sentence structure rather than punctuation. Long sentences carrying several subordinate clauses need a lot of commas; splitting them into two sentences usually reads better and needs fewer.
This comes up on Comma Rules That Matter, where it is answered in the context of the work itself.
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